I like this picture Olivia. I wonder what it would be like if we did live in a tank under the see and all of the fish watched us.I wonder what might be in the treasure box?
Hi Olivia I enjoyed reading this descriptive writing. So far, you are the only one that has recognised that 'it's just like fish in a tank,but the other way around". Well done Olivia!
Hi Olivia - Great to read your writing on your blog! I really like the way that you have started straight into the action. Who do you think the person might be? I would love to read more about what your person might look like. Why do you think he or she lit the fire? Looking forward to reading more of your posts! Mrs Phelps.
Hi Olivia Great job on your descriptive Writing. I really enjoyed reading it on your blog! Did you enjoy doing it? And how long did it take you to do it?
I like this picture Olivia. I wonder what it would be like if we did live in a tank under the see and all of the fish watched us.I wonder what might be in the treasure box?
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this descriptive writing. So far, you are the only one that has recognised that 'it's just like fish in a tank,but the other way around". Well done Olivia!
Hi Olivia - Great to read your writing on your blog! I really like the way that you have started straight into the action. Who do you think the person might be? I would love to read more about what your person might look like. Why do you think he or she lit the fire? Looking forward to reading more of your posts! Mrs Phelps.
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your descriptive Writing. I really enjoyed reading it on your blog! Did you enjoy doing it? And how long did it take you to do it?