There are some good descriptive words in there Olivia. What made you choose this picture? If you looked at this picture again what else might you see. What other words could you use to describe his hands that might mean the same or similar to wrinkly??
You have used amazing descriptive words in your writing Olivia. I can image what the picture looks like when I close my eyes. It is a pretty cool picture to describe and I love the way you explained about his moustache.
There are some good descriptive words in there Olivia. What made you choose this picture? If you looked at this picture again what else might you see. What other words could you use to describe his hands that might mean the same or similar to wrinkly??
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ReplyDeleteWow, that's a very interesting picture you have chosen to describe You have done a great job! What book is this picture from?
You have used amazing descriptive words in your writing Olivia. I can image what the picture looks like when I close my eyes. It is a pretty cool picture to describe and I love the way you explained about his moustache.
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