Hi Olivia I really like your story, it is very interesting. You have followed all the guidelines for a great narrative. You have also drawn a great picture. It's bet if you get someone to proof read your posts before you post them as there is a spelling mistake in your sentence, but it's still an awesome effort.
Hi Olivia
ReplyDeleteI really like your story, it is very interesting. You have followed all the guidelines for a great narrative. You have also drawn a great picture. It's bet if you get someone to proof read your posts before you post them as there is a spelling mistake in your sentence, but it's still an awesome effort.